Peer feedback of storyboards

Storyboard feedback from peers

Questions	Peer Answers
What did you like about my storyboard?	·         Great ideas! ·         Links to lyrics well, liked the use of filters ·         Clear narrative that matches lyrics ·         Range of ideas used
Do you feel the images flowed with the music?	·         The cuts weren't correct buy I understand that is was a technical error ·         Could define between concept and performance parts ·         Flows well throughout
Did the video ideas link with the lyrics of the song?	·         Yes great representations ·         Yes good links
Do you the filters I used were effective? Why?	·          Yes, it will be clearer when you film it ·         Gives more of a picture of the video
Is there anything you think I could improve on?	·         The fire for the chorus might be difficult to create? ·         Speed up image transitions ·         More range of clips ·         Add lighting/different camera shots

My teacher also mentioned to all that we need to add a range of different shots to our storyboards, as at the moment they look as if the video will be short from just one angle. For my video, I hope to use a range of shots, e.g. birds eye view to show vulnerability; close up shots of the female throughout to show sadness and I hope to get the actors to hold the camera at some points so that their feelings are put across more in the video.